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Body Of Work

Assignment 5 – Photography is simple https://katie9.home.blog/assignments/assignment-5-reworked/

Folder EYV KTB Assignment 5 photos

Assignment 4 – Languages of light https://katie9.home.blog/assignments/assignment-4-languages-of-light-reworked/

Folder: EYV KTB Assignment 4 photos

Assignment 2 –  https://katie9.home.blog/assignments/assignment-2/assignment-2-reworked/

Folder: EYV Assignment 2 photos for assessment

Learning Outcome 1 – Demonstrate an understanding of photographic techniques and image

Related blog links 

Freezing time – https://katie9.home.blog/2020/12/09/freezing-time/

Freezing time again – https://katie9.home.blog/2020/12/09/freezing-time-again/

I have chosen to include my work on freezing time to illustrate this learning outcome.  Exercise 3.1 asked us to take shots using fast shutter speeds in order to slow time down and see what isn’t visible to the naked eye. 

Like Markus Reugels, I was fascinated by being able to capture a single drop of liquid. He remarked it takes a lot of ‘patience to bring the image out of your head into reality’(Magezine Publishing Ltd 2015) and I certainly found that to be true.

Despite taking a lot of photographs for Exercise 3.1 and succeeding to freeze time, the image I wanted alluded me and so I did another session.  Even though plain water doesn’t have the best viscosity for these kinds of shots I had my heart set on raindrops, and I finally got the shot I was hoping for. I cropped it from the original as I felt on reflection that the tree in the background while helping to create a diagonal line, was a distraction.  It was for the same reason that I chose to reproduce it in black and white.

LO2 presenting a selected body of photographic work

Related Blog Links:

Linking photographs

Displaying your wares

Displaying photograph

I have decided to use photographs from the redrafted Assignment 3 – the decisive moment. These images represented to me a good outcome from what was due to Covid-19, a difficult brief. When working through the exercises relating to this assignment, I created what I felt were more traditional photographs of a decisive moment, but I was keen to do something a little different and to be honest, this was also in response to my location which is very rural.  

I have chosen four out of the eight photographs submitted in the assignment as I felt these were the most harmonious from colour point of view and ordered according to time of day. I displayed them here as I did in the original assignment, with a dark border with the addition of a title and an end plate. The border was intended to pull the eye inwards and suggest the darkness that was to come.

LO3 developing and communicating my ideas as a photographer

  1. Red Glow In Lion Street

This photograph was taken in response to Exercise 4.2 Artificial light.  The image has Walker Evans influences with the incorporation of signs and a nod to the decisive moment with the person standing in the middle of the road.  The image was taken during what should have been the festive season and the brightness of the lights highlighted the emptiness of the streets.

Related blog links

Light in the dark

Lighting up the dark research Rut Blees Luxemburg, Brassaï and Sato Shintaro

2. Blade Runner Influences

This photograph was taken in response to Exercise 2.1 on Zoom and reflects on ideas of who is watching whom.

Related blog links

Blade Runner Influences

Zoom – Giga Pixel Research

3. & 4. Harbour Wall and Christmas Goes Up In Smoke (CGUIS)

Both of these photographs form part of Assignment 5 – Photography is simple.  They are at opposite ends of the ‘simple’ spectrum, Harbour Wall was more about being in the right place at the right time while CGUIS was a carefully planned and practiced photograph.  There is more of an intended a narrative within these photographs.  At first glance Harbour Wall is a image of the seaside in the late afternoon, but as it was taken with lockdown restrictions in place, it also represents individual isolation, the harbour wall separating the lone walker from the couple in the distance. CGUIS would also need to be viewed in the context of lockdown in order for its full meaning to be apparent.

LO4 Demonstrate a critical and contextual understanding of photography and reflecting on your learning.

Looking back, the first thing that I noticed about my progress through this course was how dominated it was by the pandemic.  Not only did it restrict my ability to go out to take photographs, but it pervaded my thoughts; unintentionally nearly all my images relate to the feelings of isolation that Covid induced.  The barriers that it imposed however did spark more creativity and imagination as I had to think ‘outside the box’ for instance, when exploring ‘The Distance Between Us’ or ‘The Decisive Moment’.  The exercises on studio lighting were fun and again I found taking ‘influenced’ photographs such as ‘Bauhaus Influences’ or ‘Mona Kuhn Influences’ was a good way to explore techniques and to understand more about the photographs and thus the photographer.

My photography has changed, I now think more about why I am taking a photo and questioning what it is that I want to show both literally and figuratively.  I think this is most obvious in the exercises on ‘Homage’ and ‘The Distance Between Us’.  I have been a fan of Fay Godwin for a while, not only am I keen on landscapes but a lot of the landscapes she photographed are on my doorstep and I can relate to the emotional attachment she had for them and also for the frustrations she felt about lack of access to the land. Exploring a connection between a dead poet’s love for trees and my own love for trees was the basis for ‘The Distance Between Us’.   This exercise was not just about the images but also the words, together they created a whole.

My technical knowledge has improved, and I now feel more confident in my ability to take a photograph that reflects what I am trying to portray.

Related blog links

Homage – Fay Godwin

The Distance Between Us

Mona Kuhn Influences

Mona Kuhn

Bauhaus Influences

Bauhaus Research

Jitka Hanzlová – Forest

John Berger – Ways of Seeing

All quotes unless otherwise noted are from John Berger’s programme ‘Ways of Seeing (Berger, 1972).

It was frustrating not being able to get hold of his book of the same title, so I was especially pleased to find the BAFTA award-winning documentary ‘Ways of Seeing’ available on YouTube.  Being dyslexic, I also found this a more accessible way of interacting with the subject.

Although he speaks about paintings, oil paintings in particular, he references digital imaging, and his comments are an insight into photography as a medium as much as paint.

This series is still as relevant today as it was when it was broadcast in 1972.  Being a child of the 70’s it also stirred a great sense of nostalgia and highlighted culture and ‘ways of seeing’ have changed even more in the last 50 years. The programme questions ‘some of the assumptions usually made about the tradition of European painting’ (Berger, 1972) from around 1400 – 1900.  But it goes further than that because he is examining them and relating to them from the perspective of his own time and in so doing, he says we shall ‘discover something about ourselves and situation in which we are living’.

Overall, one of the things I enjoyed most about this series was its lack of pomposity and ‘artiness’ and Berger’s assertion that we have our own individual ways of looking and each of us is right. He takes a blatant swipe at what he considers artsy types, as he puts it ‘the false mystification which surrounds art’.

Part 1

Context and perspective (many ideas for this programme first outlined in essay by Walter Benjamin 1936)

At the start of this episode John Berger seemingly cuts a section showing the head of a young woman from a classical oil painting (Botticelli’s Venus and Mars) and by so doing removes it from its original context.

He mentions perspective or perhaps more precisely, who’s perspective ‘everything centres on the eye of the beholder’ – it is the person looking that matters, ‘a large part of seeing depends on habit and convention’

How we see something, the time, its setting our cultural background our emotional status even affects what we see. ‘The human eye can only be in one place at a time, we take it with us when we walk’.  Initially what and how we ‘saw’ something was chained to that fact. Berger goes on to say that camera changed this allowing us to see things that were not in front of us.  I think of this as the difference between seeing a classical painting hung in a gallery and seeing an image of it on my smart phone for example.  I see the same picture but the context and perhaps my understanding of it has changed. Or the camera has allowed us to experience something that we could not do in any other way for example the inside of a live human body.

Our eye naturally blurs out the areas we don’t want to see.  In everyday life we might focus on the beautiful shapes and colours of tulips in a pot, our brain separating them from the chaos behind.  Of course, we can try to emulate this using depth of field on our camera.

How we encounter an image also affects how we ‘view it’.  Is it as Berger asks, unique, an original? Have we gone to the effort of visiting a gallery or is it in the comfort of our own home?  How have we accessed it, is it as a photobook or an online version? Berger notes that with a digital image ‘You are seeing them in the context of your own life. They are surrounded not by gilt frames, but by the familiarity of the room you are in and the people around you.’ 

He also makes the point that once removed from its original or unique location, the image itself can be altered for example by cropping or zooming in on a section and thereby change its meaning.  If you had never seen the image in its entirety, how would you ever know – how many songs have you been surprised to learn were not originals but cover versions?

He remarks that ‘The camera, by making the work of art transmittable, has multiplied its possible meanings and destroyed its unique original meaning.’

When used out of its original context, perhaps in print, the words that surround it or the other images besides which it is placed have an impact on it as do any competing images. We are challenged to question not only how we are being shown an image but also why?

References:

John Berger / Ways of Seeing, Episode 1 (1972) (2012). Youtube. Available at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0pDE4VX_9Kk (Accessed: 12 May 2021).

Notes on Assignment 5 – reworked

In response to tutor feedback about tying my photographs to form a cohesive series I did some further research on Displaying Photographs and Linking Photographs. From this research I made the following alterations:

  • Added an explanatory title -‘Saying Goodbye To A Difficult Year’
  • Changed two of the photographs
  • Used colour to link the photographs and the display of the photographs

I had noticed whilst going through the photographs again, that there was a common colour that ran through them, dark orange, and I took the two new ones to reinforce this. I felt that these changes helped to emphasis the progressive feeling of spring and hope for a better year ahead.

Assignment 5 – Reworked

Displaying photographs

My tutor had also mentioned how the layout of photographs, how they are presented, affects their meaning.  The mode of communication allows the photographer to direct the viewer and decide the viewer experience.

Where we encounter them matters. Before the digital revolution, photographs like paintings before them, would have been more or less unique.  Each could be reproduced with techniques such as pouncing for paintings and obviously developing more prints from negatives, but there was a physicality in the seeing as John Berger comments in his programme ‘Ways of Seeing’ (Berger, 1972). The chaotic, ‘pile ‘em high’ fashion as favoured by the Royal Gallery the ‘pictures were hung frame-by-frame from chair rail to ceiling. The higher canvases, sometimes more than five tiers overhead, were tilted forward to enhance visibility and reduce glare’(National Gallery of Art) gave way to a more minimalist way of displaying images.

In the mid 1800’s Charles Eastlake, the first director of the National Gallery in London, choose dark red for the wall colour. According to the thinking of the day, this took into account ‘the subjective contributions made by the eye itself in the process of seeing’ (Klonk, 2011) which required a balance of all primary colours, red, blue and yellow in order to achieve ‘a balanced perception’ (Klonk, 2011).

In the early 20th century, a concept for displaying art using white walls, the white cube, became popular (tate,2021).  It was thought that this would prevent visitors from being distracted and allow them to focus solely on the images.  

Now we can access images almost anywhere and this changes how we respond to them.

 “You are seeing them in the context of your own life. They are surrounded not by gilt frames, but by the familiarity of the room you are in and the people around you” (Berger, 1972).

My research blog Photography and Context carries on this theme.

Displaying your wares

In response to Assignment 4 my tutor suggested I consider how the glassware of Alvar Aalto was displayed online. Looking at the Alvar Aalto Museum website it provided a good example of how to photograph objects along with how they can be displayed online but isn’t restricted to his glassware.

The background of the page is a light cream which means that if the subject has been shot against a white background the photograph still stands out from the page. The faint vertical grey lines encourage you to scroll down and ensures you take in all the images. This is also the way they draw together the few images that don’t fit within the main aesthetic of the page.

There is no horizontal separation between the images except on a few occasions and this doesn’t work for me in a few ways; firstly, where two or more images with the same background colour are placed together and secondly, where a small gap has been left between the images.

The images are very ‘factual’.  the subject, whether a chair or light fitting is the centre of attention, there is little to distract in the background which are neutral off whites, greys and blacks.  There are a few exceptions on this page which show situ photographs rather than a studio setting:

  • Aalto Glass Vase
  • Floor Lamp A805
  • Light Fitting A 333
  • Auditorium Light Fitting

I particularly like how in the photograph of the glass vase, the background is rough, light-absorbing concrete and provides the perfect foil of the smooth, luminosity of the glass. 

The studio lighting emphasises the shapes of the items for example ‘light fitting A 331’ where it lifts each of the sections and there’s fun in the photographs too, in Table Lamp A702 the two lamps appear to be having a little tête à tête.

References

Design archives – Alvar aalto foundation (no date). Available at: https://www.alvaraalto.fi/en/works/design/ (Accessed: 22 May 2021). 

Linking photographs

I can’t be alone in finding it difficult to adequately display photographs on a website.  Apart from the fact that I’m still in the toddler stage of photography, I fall on my bum quite a bit but still keep going, I also struggle with my lack of website building knowledge and the limitations that imposes.

I’d love to say that in all my blogs and assignments I am displaying my images exactly how I want them to be seen but I have neither developed my personal style or skills enough yet to do this.

However, following comments from my tutor I have looked into how others use layout to make a cohesive whole out of a group of sometimes seemingly unrelated photographs to see if I can apply it to my own images. 

One photographer I came across was Leanne James who has a style of photography not too dissimilar to my own.  Her series ‘Megalith Still’ is linked by their subject matter, in this case horses. However, her series ‘Days of Home’ has less obvious connections between the images.  There is one of tree trunks in a sea of deep green and one of a man in silhouette standing beneath a church window.  She has overcome this separateness by assigning the series with a name.  Days of Home, it attaches an emotion to each and every image in the series and helps to provide an anchor for them. Once we have been instructed in how to view them, we can make the connections. Text is important.

A photographer whom my tutor recommended looking at was Nina Berman. There are a number of ways in which she ties her photographs together:

Visual reference 

A man in his chair surrounded by his dogs, a little girl with flower hair clip sitting on a bright pink mat watching army helicopters, a small boy holding a gun. What links these?  The military connection is easier to see in the last two images but when you look more closely at the man with his dogs, you notice he is wearing a flak jacket.

Click on captions and you get more information on the photographs; ‘Human Target Practice All America Day’ for the boy, ‘Helicopter Flyby, All America Day’ for the girl and for the man, ‘Glen Spencer, Citizen Border Watch, Arizona/Mexican border’.

Together they portray US nationalism and jingoism

Colour intensity or lack thereof

eg Hedge and 9/11 Afterglow

‘Hedge’ is a group of photographs are linked by the saturated nature of their colours and an air of chaos. ‘9/11 Afterglow’ is also chaotic but all colour has been drained from the world, which feels very apt for what the images show.

Physically joining photographs 

eg 9/11 Afterglow

Apart from the black and white theme, these images have also been visually spliced together as diptychs forcing us to connect them.

Subject 

eg Purple Hearts

These photographs are linked by the subject of loss, whether it is the loss of a person, body part, identity or ideals.

Place 

eg Obama Train

Nina Berman took a series of photographs through the windows of Obama’s election campaign train.  All though they feature different locations they are all taken from the same ‘place’.

Jitka Hanzlová – Forest

Jitka Hanzlová : Forest
2000–2005

Hanzlová was forced to leave her native Czech village in 1982.  She found herself in Germany knowing little of the language or the place and The Forest records her return to the forest of her childhood and probably not surprisingly she ‘has created an oeuvre that engages with notions of belonging and alienation.’  (Tejeda, I. and Tejeda, J. 2012).

We both take photographs of trees, but they will never be the same as her experiences and mine are so totally different.  I don’t know forests like Hanzlová’s.  Mine are the mild-mannered, comfortable woodlands of the south-east. Mine are ones that I have known all my life.  Where mine reflect the gentle nature of my woods, her photographs are stark; there is an eyrie quality that both lures us in and warns us to stay out. Perhaps this is some kind of primal fear, a relic of when fearsome beasts roamed the forests, and we were as likely to be hunted as to hunt.  There are many literary allusions to this, Berger mentions it in his essay, so does Tolkien in the Lord of the Rings and C. S. Lewis’ populates his Narnian woodlands with dryads.

She always photographed alone in the forest and on occasion felt an unexplainable fear when the forest sounds dropped away and she was left with silence. (Berger,2013) have often felt that woodlands or forests have a sense of themselves as a whole and in John Berger’s essay ‘Jitka Hanzlová: Forest he remarks that ‘A forest is also a meeting-place between those who enter it and something unnameable and attendant, waiting behind a tree or in the undergrowth’.

She offer’s glimpses of the forest, using artificial light to illuminate tufts of grass or a tree branch or she waits for the mists to come down and obscure the view.  By restricting what we can see we get only snapshots of understanding. Perhaps like the flashes of memory sparked by reality of the place.

A selection of her work can be viewed on the Yancey Richardson website 

The distance between us‘ is a collection of photographs of trees as inspired by poet Joyce Kilmer

References

Buchanan, K. (2021) ‘The Distance Between Us’, Katies Photographic Journey, 2 March. Available at: https://katie9.home.blog/2021/03/02/the-distance-between-us/ (Accessed: 24 May 2021).

Berger, J., 2013. Understanding a photograph. 16th ed. Great Britain: Penguin Group.

Jitka Hanzlova (no date). Available at: https://www.yanceyrichardson.com/exhibitions/jitka-hanzlova3?view=slider (Accessed: 24 May 2021).

Tejeda, I. and Tejeda, J. (2012) Jitka Hanzlova. Madrid, Spain: TF Editores. Available at: http://www.jitkahanzlova.com/about.htm (Accessed: 24 May 2021).

Homage – Fay Godwin

Exercise 5.2

Fay Godwin was a landscape photographer.  She did big skies, clouds, played with reflections in water, noted gleams of light but importantly, she captured meaning in her images.  In an interview with Photographic Historian and her friend, Roger Taylor (2010), he notes that Fay had initial aspiration to be a documentary photographer, she then entered a ‘romantic’ phase before ‘becoming more politically sensitive’ and taking photographs with a desire to ‘report back’. 

She detested any idea or romanticism in her photographs and fiercely denied that this was the case. Perhaps she would have been happier with Margaret Drabble’s (2011) thought that she was instead, ‘with her portraits of authors, bleak landscapes and scenes of urban dereliction – was the most poetic of photographers’.

Godwin had not only a keen eye for photography, but through necessity, a keen eye to making a profit from her work. Her photographs were usually destined for books, working in collaboration with a plethora of writers such as Ted Hughes and Fowles and, in her travel book The Saxon Shore Way: From Gravesend to Rye, the playwright Allen Sillitoe. The Saxon Shoreway was published in 1983 and, as Margaret Drabble (2011) of The Guardian writes, ‘follows the indefatigable and map-loving Alan Sillitoe as he takes a nine-day walk munching on rye bread and Polish sausage round the Kent shore from Gravesend to Rye’

It is from this volume that I have chosen the photograph to which I will pay homage although in truth it is an homage to Godwin rather than this particular image. 

Large Cloud, Near Bilsington 1981  – Fay Godwin

Her books have retained their value.  This is no doubt a good thing but in these straightened times of Covid-19 restrictions they have become unaffordable and those in the public domain are inaccessible. Because of this I have only encountered her images on the web and with all the limitations that imposes; digitisation of images, quality, image size, context and lack of accompanying words. Thus, the external context, the information surrounding the picture as envisaged by the photographer, is gone.  Without any further information her Large Cloud could be just that, a beautifully shaped, beautifully shot photograph.

Although Godwin did do colour photography, she favoured black and white for a long while. The strong lines of the crops in the fields draws the eye towards the beast of a cloud which is separated from the viewer by the man-made barrier at the top of the hill.  The crops look as if they have been recently harvested, the gate is the only reference to human occupation as there are no people in the photograph. For someone wanting to ‘get away from it all’, this is an alluring scene. The drama in the clouds, a portent of rain perhaps, adds a sense of drama to it. This gives me its internal context

What about the original context? Knowing that it comes from a travel book, I can imagine that the image was meant to give a sense of place, a reference to the rural nature of the area and the big open skies that are created as the land gives way to the marshes and the sea. The clue to what was important to Fay comes from her title, simple Large Cloud ands its location. From what I have read online about Godwin and her photographic journey I know how important the environment was to her, as Margaret Drabble (2011) says she ‘became increasingly concerned with our connection with the earth and our assaults on it, by the way we mess up our rivers and canals, our shores and embankments.’  She saw nature and walking as a way of healing her body (Southbank Show 1986). Wherever possible I like to listen to what a photographer has to say themselves rather than relying on second-hand interpretation and we are lucky enough to have a documentary by the Southbank Show in 1986 to give some insight into Godwin and her work.  

I hope my photograph does justice to her ideals.  It could easily have featured in her book the Saxon Shoreway in that it is taken where her journey ends, in Rye.  It is an AONB yet there among the salt marshes and river is an industrial site so I hope I have echoed her passion for the environment. Like Godwin might have done (Southbank Show 1986), I have eschewed the tourist postcard view which would have omitted the factories juxtaposing them instead  with the bucolic rural scene. As in her image, my photograph focuses on the clouds which can be seen blending with the steam rising from the factory; an odd blend of romanticism and realism.

Rural Industry – Rye – 2021 – ktgb

This exercise also asked us to look back on other photographs which were taken in homage and reflect again on them. The first example is of how Bauhaus influenced a series of photographs and was triggered by a reference to Moholy-Nagy in our course folder. Not knowing who Moholy-Nagy was I looked him up. I liked how he made ordinary objects interesting by how they were framed and how they were lit. You can read more in my Bauhaus Influences blog.

Bauhaus my way 1 – 2020 ktgb

The second image below came from research I did surrounding Thomas Ruff’s pixelation of images. I discovered Mona Kuhn and how she allows abstraction into her work. You can read more about my Mona Kuhn influences in my blog

Foiled again – 2020 ktgb

References

Drabble, M. (2011) ‘Fay Godwin at the National Media Museum’, The Guardian, 8 January. Available at: http://www.theguardian.com/artanddesign/2011/jan/08/margaret-drabble-fay-godwin (Accessed: 5 March 2021).

National Science and Media Museum (2010) Fay Godwin photography exhibition ‘Land Revisited’ [Online] Youtube. Available at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FpxQvhmgWpg (Accessed: 10 March 2021).

Southbank Show – Photographer Fay Godwin documentary 1986 (2020). [Online] Youtube. Available at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJR_UJnry8s (Accessed: 5 March 2021).

The Saxon Shore Way: From Gravesend to Rye, by Sillitoe and Fay Godwin. London: Hutchinson, 1983

The Distance Between Us

Exercise 5.1

Trees

BY JOYCE KILMER

I think that I shall never see

A poem lovely as a tree.

A tree whose hungry mouth is prest

Against the earth’s sweet flowing breast;

A tree that looks at God all day,

And lifts her leafy arms to pray;

A tree that may in Summer wear

A nest of robins in her hair;

Upon whose bosom snow has lain;

Who intimately lives with rain.

Poems are made by fools like me,

But only God can make a tree.

As I felt I was struggling with finding anything directly that I felt connected to and that would offer that reflectivity I needed for this exercise, I drew on something that I had participated in for a recent SERG meeting. It was decided that we would write and illustrate a Haiku.  It was a fun exercise and I enjoyed seeing how others made the connections between the different types of media.  I chose therefore, this poem Trees to work with for this exercise.

The EYV course book quotes Alexia Clorinda in Project 1 ‘I don’t pretend that I can describe the ‘other’. The camera for me is more a meter that measures the distance between myself and the other. It’s about the encounter between myself and the other; it’s not about the other.’ I could not describe the ‘other’ in a direct pictorial form but could document my reaction to a very simple verse. Although I have photographed trees, this exercise was more about the way I connected with a perpetually young man who lived his life on a different continent, found joy in nature and witnessed suffering.

The writer, Joyce Kilmer was ‘known for poetry that celebrated the common beauty of the natural world as well as his religious faith’ (Poetry Foundation, nd).  I am very interested in ecology and I love trees, so I felt I could understand his delight in what he saw and frustration with trying to capture that; I could so easily have replaced, ‘photograph’ for ‘poem’. I also felt great sadness that he had died young; I have a son who is the same age now as Joyce Kilmer was when he died, and I can only imagine the great sense of loss and of a life unlived felt by his family.

These images allowed me to explore my relationship with trees.  There is the simple delight of light haloing the crown, the many colours of the bark or catkins swaying in the breeze; but things are not always what they seem.  The Green Man is often peering out from the bark, alien like creatures inhabit the branches or peep out from the soft earth. 

I try to find the elemental spirit of a tree in a photograph but like Kilmer realise that I can only capture their image, their spirit is of their own making.  Although I’m not sure that Kilmer would have approved of the Green Man reference. 

Even in decay trees offer intriguing shapes, their bark is richly textured and coloured. When I’m walking through the woods at first glance you see the trees and then on closer inspection you might see the Green Man

The Green Man of the Woods

Or a giant, alien caterpillar peering down from the branches

Or a giant, alien caterpillar peering down from the branches

Roots seeking nourishment in the earth or the bushy eyebrows and large nose of a tree spirit?

And with feet like these, who doesn’t think dinosaurs might still roam the earth.

Many of these observations come after the photograph has been taken. The dinosaur feet for example was initially an attempt at photographing the moss and the lichen, and the Green Man came from photographing the texture of the bark.

Choosing a ‘best shot’ was quite difficult; how am I defining my best shot? I decided not to go for technical quality as I felt this exercise was more about emotions. So I choose the photograph that for me, instilled the essence of what we get from nature when we wonder in the woods.

A family of Trees.

This photograph takes me on more of a journey which is emphasised by the figure in the background. I like the way the diagonal line of the tree leads to them so that although the person is small, size-wise, they act as a ‘point’ and play an important part in the scene. The line of the path that they stand on leads upwards and out of the frame and this allows us to walk it with them into the future and the unknown.

If you would like to read more on my exploration of ‘point’ you can do so HERE.

References

Poetry Foundation (no date) Trees by Joyce Kilmer. Available at: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/12744/trees (Accessed: 2 March 2021).

Poetry Foundation (no date) Joyce Kilmer. Available at: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/joyce-kilmer (Accessed: 2 March 2021).

Notes on Assignment 3 Reworked

I made the following alterations to this assignment following tutor feed back – I explored and rearranged the order in which I have presented the images. Discussion here had focused on how each of the photographs leads through the going down of the light and the subsequent end of the day. With this in mind, I moved the first picture, ‘Going down in a blaze of glory’ to the end. The discussion had also focused on the captioning of the images – it was noted that I had switched between lyrical, descriptive captions and practical ones. The suggestion was that I should try to do the series both ways and choose which one best suited the intent of my series. Talking about why I chose to take this series of photographs, I realised that they were symbolic of the situation created by the Covid-19 crisis. It feels very much like the sun is going down on the life that we know and have become accustomed to, crowded places are now empty and we are not yet certain of what the next day will bring. With this in mind I decided to keep the lyrical captions, amending some along the way, as a way of leading the viewer’s understanding of the photographs.

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